23-01-2012

Today we had our first screening of our first edit of our music video so far. We had feedback sheets being filled out about our music video. We had a few different responses about our music video,various and constructive feedback. Jack and Leanne gave advice on the types of shots we have and how we can change bits of our video for the better. Also, they gave us advice to add in a sunrise and sunset to begin and end our music video as the ending wasn't as strong as we would like. I think the time lapse of a sunrise and sunset will give a good effect, this is a good element to have in our music video as it reinforces our idea of sleep all day and party all night. We will then begin the music video with the sunset to reflect this point. Also, I think its a good idea to have this in the music video as it is one of our original ideas as we wanted in our first planned video.